Our mistakes teach our children important life lessons, but the cost is their innocence... and perhaps our self respect. 🥺 I hope Alton eventually ended up in a good place.
A detective for a son. Not good if you are a filanderer. The Playboys in the garage--same in the early sixties. A different style of story for you Scott. I enjoyed it.
Our mistakes teach our children important life lessons, but the cost is their innocence... and perhaps our self respect. 🥺 I hope Alton eventually ended up in a good place.
Thanks for this and for reading, hope you are well!
Thanks for writing! I'm better than I was, thanks for asking. Time is a a great healer.
Great story Scott, you put so much in a short story, and I always have to read it several times 😂
Thanks for this Gary and thanks for reading!!
Oh for heaven's sake! What a last line! You left us engaged and speculating! Excellent, Scott.
Thanks so much, Sharron, thx for reading!
Wow, that hit like a bull whip. You just never know what kind of secrets people are keeping or who will expose them. Great story, Scott.
Thanks Parker for this and thanks for reading, means a lot.
A lot to unpack in this one, so I appreciated it a lot. Great flash fiction that left me thinking about being young, disillusionment, and family.
Thank you for this and thank you for reading!!
great story. thank you.
Thank you, Michael. Thanks for reading!
A detective for a son. Not good if you are a filanderer. The Playboys in the garage--same in the early sixties. A different style of story for you Scott. I enjoyed it.
Thanks, K.C., only the first sentence is true but the settings are historically accurate 😊
Wow ... what a gem of a story, Scott. So many aspects ...
Thanks, Carlotta, yes a little change of pace this time
Alton Baker and Olsens in one story!!
Wowsa
Can All American be next!!
There are so many layers to this. Great story!
Thank you Madeleine, and thanks for reading!!
Beautiful story, Scott.
Thanks, Martine!