29 Comments
User's avatar
Joe O's avatar

Really enjoyed it. Nice work. Scott, your timing and ability to place your audience in a scene is equal to the great Mel

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you sir, no Harwell but he’s ours.

Vicky Heath's avatar

😢⚾

Scott MacLeod's avatar

My first true love always brings out the mush lol

M.E. Proctor's avatar

I love that! Thank you, Scott!

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you Martine it means a lot.

Carole Roseland's avatar

Nice send-off!

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Yes, wouldn’t mind it myself

Parker McCoy's avatar

I bet that's exactly how Uncle Donald would have had it. Hehe. Great story, Scott.

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thx Parker. There are worse ways to go out for sure.

Julian Grant's avatar

Lovely work.

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Very kind thank you

Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Scott, another one hit out of the park. I loved the part with the kids sitting under the coffin and the ending very special.

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thanks, Kathleen, so kind

Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

You’re welcome, Scott

Jason Beech Messy Business's avatar

Top notch

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you sir

Gary Mays's avatar

I loved your story Scott, I think it is my favorite so far

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you Gary!

Rhumond Tonique's avatar

Great writing as usual, Scott - you hit a home run. If a guy has to go, it should be with the Yankees.

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you Rhumond I feel the same way!

K.C. Knouse's avatar

Post-war there was a great demand for salespeople. The consumer economy was gaining momentum. Five of my seven uncles made a living selling: life insurance, meat products, advertising specialties, retail clothing, and auto parts. They all made good livings. The other two uncles worked for the government.

The kid hid under the casket cart. It must have been the best location to receive a strong radio signal.

What a wise priest and a satisfying ending, Scott.

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you my friend. You gotta know when to fold ‘em

Carlotta Dale's avatar

I'm like the Dad--I don't like baseball--but this is a wonderful, moving story, Scott.

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you Carlotta I appreciate it !

Sharron Bassano's avatar

"A victim of his times. A workday of sales lunches, highballs, Chesterfields and rib roast. His only aerobic exercise was flicking his lighter, or swatting Gigi on the behind whenever she passed." Uncle Donald's life in three true sentences. And that beautiful last paragraph hit my heart like an arrow. Just excellent, Scott!

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you Sharron!

David Perlmutter's avatar

A fan is a fan, even in death...