This week’s new flash fiction is jailhouse noir.
Just couldn't help it, could he? Fabulous tale, Scott! 💞
Thanks, Dawn. Loose lips sink ships!
He definitely is sunk!
I liked it because I'd guessed the old guy was a cop from the start so was just waiting to see how he'd get Harley. Brilliant!
Thank you and good sleuthing! Well done!!
I didn’t expect the cell mate to be a cop. I was surprised that the new arrival was so dumb!
Thank you for reading!
Very good Scott, I can never figure out where you are going, you fool me every time 👿
Thank you Gary and thank you for always reading!!
How to solve cases while napping! Fun.
You’ve heard of “I can do it in my sleep “ lol
Not professional enough to know about talking to cellmates, this “Richard Petty,” huh?
Amateur mistake😊
Should’ve stuck to petty crimes or taken up race car driving!
Not Richard Petty the NASCAR driver?
Of course! The King.
Oops!
😎
Villains die from talking too much 😂
哈哈哈哈哈
Loose lips…
Nicely done. Love it when old dudes win in the end.
Ha thanks yes I am biased towards that demographic!
Same! My Lincoln Paradox protagonist is 65. 😊👍
Beautifully done. Absolutely brilliant! Very clever. Love it!
Thank you, Wendy, much appreciated. And thanks for reading!
This is fun read. Well done.
Thank you, Paul!
Neat narrative, Scott. Harley hoist by his own petard!
Thanks, Steve yes silence can be golden!
Another winner, Scott. Sully's persistent questioning should have made Harley suspicious, but pride goeth before a fall. Another winner, my friend.
Thank you!
Loose lips, right? That reminds me of a line in Goodfellas, went something like: "You told them nothin' and they got nothin'." Harley should've watched more movies, perhaps? hehe As always, this was a great story with a killer twist, Scott!
Ha yes, thank you as always. Secondary moral: pay your traffic tickets!
Harley's criminal career is looking shaky. Hehe. Cool tale, Scott.
Neatly done, young man. :-)
Thank you, sir!
Just couldn't help it, could he? Fabulous tale, Scott! 💞
Thanks, Dawn. Loose lips sink ships!
He definitely is sunk!
I liked it because I'd guessed the old guy was a cop from the start so was just waiting to see how he'd get Harley. Brilliant!
Thank you and good sleuthing! Well done!!
I didn’t expect the cell mate to be a cop. I was surprised that the new arrival was so dumb!
Thank you for reading!
Very good Scott, I can never figure out where you are going, you fool me every time 👿
Thank you Gary and thank you for always reading!!
How to solve cases while napping! Fun.
You’ve heard of “I can do it in my sleep “ lol
Not professional enough to know about talking to cellmates, this “Richard Petty,” huh?
Amateur mistake😊
Should’ve stuck to petty crimes or taken up race car driving!
Not Richard Petty the NASCAR driver?
Of course! The King.
Oops!
😎
Villains die from talking too much 😂
哈哈哈哈哈
Loose lips…
Nicely done. Love it when old dudes win in the end.
Ha thanks yes I am biased towards that demographic!
Same! My Lincoln Paradox protagonist is 65. 😊👍
Beautifully done. Absolutely brilliant! Very clever. Love it!
Thank you, Wendy, much appreciated. And thanks for reading!
This is fun read. Well done.
Thank you, Paul!
Neat narrative, Scott. Harley hoist by his own petard!
Thanks, Steve yes silence can be golden!
Another winner, Scott. Sully's persistent questioning should have made Harley suspicious, but pride goeth before a fall. Another winner, my friend.
Thank you!
Loose lips, right? That reminds me of a line in Goodfellas, went something like: "You told them nothin' and they got nothin'." Harley should've watched more movies, perhaps? hehe As always, this was a great story with a killer twist, Scott!
Ha yes, thank you as always. Secondary moral: pay your traffic tickets!
Harley's criminal career is looking shaky. Hehe. Cool tale, Scott.
Thank you!
Neatly done, young man. :-)
Thank you, sir!