This week’s new flash fiction is Florida noir.
It could only have been parody.
Nothing but. Thanks for this and for reading.
Great ending. And that's the important part.
Thank you! Thanks for reading!
Excellent piece of writing Scott. Well done. - Jim
Thank you, my friend. Thank you for reading!
You fool me every time Scott, I can never figure out what's coming,?
Thank you for reading!!
Wow, this one felt a little different, but in a good way! Loved the writing here, too: "Man having the last word. Over nature. Over Jeff." That line stuck with me.
Another solid read, Scott!
Yes this went a little dark, thank you and thx for reading!
Brilliant writing, Scott, but a real downer being in that guy's head for the whole story😁.
I appreciate it. Funny, I enjoyed my vaca there last week it just came out dark!
The story goes out in a blaze of glory. Nice one!
Thanks, Steve!
Poor Jeff. Those damn condos!
Where is the zoning board when you need them!
Perfect ending and sadly realistic.
Thanks, Carole and thanks for reading!
Always a pleasure, Scott!
A little dark. Nice work as usual.
( see my pun about the sunset…..)
Thanks, Coop, this one eclipses all your other comments!
You got me
Laughing
When nothing goes your way, even a sunset...
Not his day
Ugh. I hate beach front high rises
Amen.
Superb, Scott! I actually felt sorry for old Jeff.
Thank you Sharron, yes a lost soul
It could only have been parody.
Nothing but. Thanks for this and for reading.
Great ending. And that's the important part.
Thank you! Thanks for reading!
Excellent piece of writing Scott. Well done. - Jim
Thank you, my friend. Thank you for reading!
You fool me every time Scott, I can never figure out what's coming,?
Thank you for reading!!
Wow, this one felt a little different, but in a good way! Loved the writing here, too: "Man having the last word. Over nature. Over Jeff." That line stuck with me.
Another solid read, Scott!
Yes this went a little dark, thank you and thx for reading!
Brilliant writing, Scott, but a real downer being in that guy's head for the whole story😁.
I appreciate it. Funny, I enjoyed my vaca there last week it just came out dark!
The story goes out in a blaze of glory. Nice one!
Thanks, Steve!
Poor Jeff. Those damn condos!
Where is the zoning board when you need them!
Perfect ending and sadly realistic.
Thanks, Carole and thanks for reading!
Always a pleasure, Scott!
A little dark. Nice work as usual.
( see my pun about the sunset…..)
Thanks, Coop, this one eclipses all your other comments!
You got me
Laughing
When nothing goes your way, even a sunset...
Not his day
Ugh. I hate beach front high rises
Amen.
Superb, Scott! I actually felt sorry for old Jeff.
Thank you Sharron, yes a lost soul