This week’s new flash fiction is Confessional Noir. A Tell-All, with a twist!
Exceptionally well done, Scott. Really very good.
Thx, Barrie very kind as always.
Great job, Scott!
Thx, Theresa!
"Bet he had as many sins as she hidden beneath it. Probably more." ( Without a doubt.)
"Damn right she killed her husband. You would have too. Why wasn’t anybody keeping track of his trespasses?" ( Why, indeed?)
Your use of short, rather blunt sentences here is very effective, Scott. It gives just the right rhythm.
Thanks, Sharron, means a lot.
Oh, I do so love the juxtaposition of the wooden box of the confessional and the wooden enclosure of the witness box. Well done!
Thanks Cassandra!
very clever!
canary feathers! wicked good!
😆
Thx, pal!
Now, how cautiously, and deliberately was that rolled out? Very. Well done!
Thanks for reading and for the support!
Fooled me! Good job!
Read this week’s!
Thank you!
Really tricked me with this one, superbly done
Thank you sir, and thx as always for reading!
Killer storytelling, friend.
Very kind, thank you and thx for reading.
Great twist. I guess she got more than just three Hail Marys and an Our Father, then. At least a Novena!
Thx! Five Hail Marys with a chance of three for good behavior.
Excellent! Bravo!
Thank you 😊
Ooops! Daydreaming can have its drawbacks. 🤣 I love twist endings, so this was right up my alley.
I keep ‘em short so people stay with it up to the twist😊
I write a lot of shorts. It seems to be my workflow.
Thx Mark!
The seamless shift from confessional to courtroom was a very good subversion of expectations.
Thank you for sharing. I also have a personal question I wanted to ask, I left it inbox, when you have time please check it out.
You are welcome
Lovely twist at the end, Scott! You got me.
Thx Nick!
Scott, did not expect that amazing
Thank you for reading to the end lol!!!
Brilliant 🌟
Exceptionally well done, Scott. Really very good.
Thx, Barrie very kind as always.
Great job, Scott!
Thx, Theresa!
"Bet he had as many sins as she hidden beneath it. Probably more." ( Without a doubt.)
"Damn right she killed her husband. You would have too. Why wasn’t anybody keeping track of his trespasses?" ( Why, indeed?)
Your use of short, rather blunt sentences here is very effective, Scott. It gives just the right rhythm.
Thanks, Sharron, means a lot.
Oh, I do so love the juxtaposition of the wooden box of the confessional and the wooden enclosure of the witness box. Well done!
Thanks Cassandra!
very clever!
canary feathers! wicked good!
😆
Thx, pal!
Now, how cautiously, and deliberately was that rolled out? Very. Well done!
Thanks for reading and for the support!
Fooled me! Good job!
Read this week’s!
Thank you!
Really tricked me with this one, superbly done
Thank you sir, and thx as always for reading!
Killer storytelling, friend.
Very kind, thank you and thx for reading.
Great twist. I guess she got more than just three Hail Marys and an Our Father, then. At least a Novena!
Thx! Five Hail Marys with a chance of three for good behavior.
Excellent! Bravo!
Thank you 😊
Ooops! Daydreaming can have its drawbacks. 🤣 I love twist endings, so this was right up my alley.
I keep ‘em short so people stay with it up to the twist😊
I write a lot of shorts. It seems to be my workflow.
Thx Mark!
The seamless shift from confessional to courtroom was a very good subversion of expectations.
Thank you for sharing. I also have a personal question I wanted to ask, I left it inbox, when you have time please check it out.
Thank you!
You are welcome
Lovely twist at the end, Scott! You got me.
Thx Nick!
Scott, did not expect that amazing
Thank you for reading to the end lol!!!
Brilliant 🌟