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Nick Buchheit's avatar

Chalkie and Thor jumped out from the page. Great ending.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thx, very nice of you, thanks for reading and support

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Henry Allsebrook's avatar

"Chalkie wasn’t absent the day they handed out brainpower but let’s say he certainly was tardy."

Love it!

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thx. I’ve known some Chalkies lol

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Another gem. Always inventive word-play.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thx as always for reading and the support

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Gerard DiLeo's avatar

Beware the waves unseen. Beware the pulses unfelt. Luddites don't mix well with everyone.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

These waves had him waving goodbye

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M.E. Proctor's avatar

It's a well-known fact that you can't think of everything... although Mr. Ocean certainly did a good job.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

It’s always something lol

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Kim Smyth's avatar

Yes because God has a wicked sense of humor.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Best laid plans… lol

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thank you !!

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