This week’s new flash fiction is a final coffee break, with a twist.
Damn, Scott. Love the twist!
I'm mad I didn't see it coming. You buried it well. Great stuff!
Thanks, Nick!
Another winner, Scott.
Who could resist a fancy coffee with olive oil in it?
Caffeine the silent killer 😊
I enjoyed it--just hit me that you mentioned she never knew her father early in the (short) story.
My only question is about "St. Mel's". Sounds like a Jewish saint.
Little Brother
Thx for reading! My first wedding was at St Mel’s Church in Flushing. Apparently his powers to work miracles are limited😊
Nice twist!
Thank you!
Very nice. Well constructed
Many thanks.
That’s a great twist. Love it.
Very kind, thank you.
So good!
Thx for support!!
Oh wow, knocked my socks off,
So great to hear, made my day, thx
Damn, Scott. Love the twist!
I'm mad I didn't see it coming. You buried it well. Great stuff!
Thanks, Nick!
Another winner, Scott.
Who could resist a fancy coffee with olive oil in it?
Caffeine the silent killer 😊
I enjoyed it--just hit me that you mentioned she never knew her father early in the (short) story.
My only question is about "St. Mel's". Sounds like a Jewish saint.
Little Brother
Thx for reading! My first wedding was at St Mel’s Church in Flushing. Apparently his powers to work miracles are limited😊
Nice twist!
Thank you!
Very nice. Well constructed
Many thanks.
That’s a great twist. Love it.
Very kind, thank you.
So good!
Thx for support!!
Oh wow, knocked my socks off,
So great to hear, made my day, thx